Review of Justin Ard's Exercise

I randomly selected Justin Ard's technical writing exercise as the one I would review.

On first inspection, I found it to be very well-done. It really helped to clear up the instructions, the original of which had me confused, to be honest. Even though I know how to set up a shared drive on a Windows OS, the original instructions were horrible enough to make me forget. I thought that Justin's instructions were extremely clear and concise, and they were good enough to make me want to go re-write my own in shame. I think he decoded the originals very well and translated them into basic English which would be easy-to-follow even for the inexperienced operator.

Read Justin's version here.